blow away kite

Retailing The blow away kite.

19/09/2016

Re Created by Eden

Story by Pamela Gates

Illustrated by Claire Bridge

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Ben’s dad fell and let go of the kite everyone thought be had lost his kite but it slashed in the water and Ben’s dad dived into the light blue water and brought the kite back to Ben.

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On a hot windy day, a little boy named Ben was walking around the house playing around until his parents gave him a gift, Ben was so excited he went straight to it and unwrapped it his eyes was amazed at what his gift was and looked at his favorite color kite. He asked his dad if they could go on the beach because it was a sunny day so they could fly the kite, dad replied,” Yes sure son, it's a hot day so why not ,LET go to the beach and fly my black and blue dragon kite and then dad wanted to have a tun and dad was running his best and then he tripped and he let it go and then the kite flew away then dad ran and he tripped over again and again and the tide went closer and he tripped once more and let go of the kite and there on the kite splashed into the water and dad saved the kite. Finally they all went home.

Ben was sad at first then became happy and the moral of the story was always be responsible.

Water cycle

this term we have been learning about the water cycle and that it has been going in a circle
for a millions of years.

Name: Eden                                                                                                  10/10/16

“Holidays”, the weeks that everyone likes. In my opinion I want holidays to be longer, so I can spend more time with my family, and some friends, Holidays should be longer!

To begin with, in the holidays you could have a great time, Firstly you can go to the movies with some of your family or take someone to watch a cool movie with you. Secondly ,you could go bowling and play against other people and have lots of fun.

Other things you could do is watch tv with family members or friends ,or go shopping with mom or dad apart from just thinking about school and what you are going to do to try and be good. You could also go fishing or go to the park, or help parents clean the house or garage. Holidays should be long because I like to hang out with more of my unknown family, so that I could get to know them better.  Finally you could take time off from schoolwork and other difficult things  at school.  You won't need to rush when you need to do something important or you could just be lazy and do nothing but eat and watch TV.

In conclusion you could spend more time with your family, Holidays are great and I think they should be longer.