Today miss inspired us to write a recount about a spooky picture. we had to figure what happened before and will happen after. We had to hook the reader and to get them intrested. my teacher said she was stunned and horrified of this scary story I wrote.
“Ahhh!” Lily shouted for help and begged the mysterious man for mercy. She started to try and squirm out of the mans rough hands but this man never showed her compassion. The more she annoyed him, the tougher his hands started to spin around her until the limit was reached and she started to get strangled. Will she survive. . .?
Time was flying by, as Lily waved goodbye to her parents, she was going to school. Lily had hesitated to step inside the school bus, with millions of kids. She had a fear of staying away from her parents, she never felt comfortable being so far away from them. After that horrible bus ride, Lily jumped off the bus and ran to her friend James ( 15 years old ) .She hugged him as tight as a cobra until he had figured who might have done so. “Lily are you still scared about leaving your parents?” James asked softly. Lily shoke in fear, she regretted going to school but then “ding ding ding !” the bell rang so james walked lily to class.
After 7 hours in school james walked with lily to her house because she was paranoid about going in the bus. She hated going in there. After the long walk Lily ran inside calling for her mom and dad. But instead of seeing them she smelt a horrifying smell that was repulsive until she saw the two in the hallway, with a large hole stabbed through there hearts. Lily screamed and cried. james noticed the scream so he ran inside but what he saw was unbelievable. he called the ambulance for service. Lily fainted, close to the dead corpses of her parents.The ambulance arrived and james told them what happened and so the family of lily's house hold was rushed to the hospital.
Lily woke up with a blurry bright light flashing in her eyes. She saw a lot of doctors and nurses surrounding her. Then her memories quickly rushed back to her and she sat up looking around. She panicked, and asked “Where am I and where are my parents?” A doctor suddenly walked in and told her exactly what happened.”I'm sorry for your lost your parents morgue, but your parents have been killed by a large object, known as the man of the woods. He aggressively stabbed them, and left their corpses in the hallway of your house. Investigation has been done around your neighborhood, so you have to stay with one of your friends,james decided to take care of you. he is waiting outside for you with some food.” Lily rushed out of the operation room and saw the food in James hands, she quickly sat down and ate the food. James woke up to see her eating and he smiled. Then after Lily finished eating, James grabbed Lily's hand and they walked home and slept.
Lily had a nightmare about her parents, she was really scared. She didn’t like bad dreams so she went to look for James. She saw him in the kitchen. She peeked through the door, to see James arguing with his parents. “She can’t stay here James, we can’t produce enough food for everyone!” Roared James mom “We can't take care of both of you, James you're a troublemaker yourself” exclaimed James dad. Lily heard everything she felt so sorry for coming home with James but those words that came out of James mom and dad's mouth hurt Lily, she got hurt so much. She ran to the house door, leaving with a giant slam, and nearly breaking the house door. James and his parents heard that she left, they looked out the window to see where she was going. She had went to the haunted forest. James ran after her, fearing of what might happen.
I have decided to leave this writing for my own time to finish but if you would like to read the first paragraph you can read as much as you like
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